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In April my cousin was getting married and she asked as a favor to take her some pictures.

Here is one of the preview ones. It was my first time taking photos at a wedding hopefully they came out right.
I'll be uploading my favs in the next weeks.

I'm requesting critique to hear some feedback because I'll like to know what I can improve. Thanks!

Model: Ivette
Photo taken by Me.

April 18, 2009

Critiques


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This is a nice picture. I've marked the originality as a medium score mostly because I've seen works like this before. But regardless of that it's still a good shot.

When I saw it, it looked to me as if she was second guessing herself. Not exactly because of the person she will be dedicating herself to more entirely than she already has but the fact that marriage is a HUGE step in life.

I'm willing to bet that everyone will second guess themselves once while engaged. For the sole fact that is such a big step.

And even though it was your first time taking wedding shots. This came out very nicely as mentioned before. :aww: You should try doing more weddings in the future.
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Wow, so pretty! Congrats to her. ^^
I love the angle.
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Ivette looks gorgeous!!! :flirty:

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yes she was looking beautiful!

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NIKON CORPORATION
NIKON D40
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28 mm
800
Apr 18, 2009, 3:33:44 PM

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